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Suicide List by ~stereo-typed:iconstereo-typed:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Horror & Macabre > Spoken Word


Jump off a bridge,
Slit your wrist,
Do everything on
The suicide list.
Put a gun to your head,
A noose on your neck,
Shove those pills down your throat,
And your suicide list? Check.
They say that they love you.
They say that they care.
They say they'll be there for you,
But are they ever there?
They wear their fake smiles,
You wear your mask.
They say you're fine.
They never ask.
So, jump of a bridge,
And slit your wrist.
You're dead anyway
When they find this.
©2008-2009 ~stereo-typed
:iconstereo-typed:

Author's Comments

Something I did during math class sometime this week.

Okay, just a few days after I posted this piece it became the most popular thing in my gallery. Don't get me wrong, I really, really, REALLY like the recognition (loves being praised), but I strongly recommend my other poems, this one in particular --> [link]
It's my personal favorite.
Go check out my other ones, too! If you like these old poems, you'll like my new ones. :D

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Mood: Wow! ~aishiteru-wa Apr 12, 2008, 9:58:45 AM
Wow.


That's all I can say.

Wow.

--
"I am not of that feather, to shake off my friend when he must need me"

"There are two means of refuge from the miseries of life: music and cats." -- Albert Schweitzer
:iconunlabeled-x-retarded:
~Unlabeled-X-Retarded Apr 12, 2008, 9:58:55 AM
wow..:heart:

--
_DontLabelMusic,EnjoyIt_

=.NoOneWantsToBeThemselves.TryHards.Wannabes.Fakes.KillThemAll.AndTheirMinds.=

_You'reNotASoupCan.You'reAPerson._
:iconacidbathsadie:
~AcidBathSadie Apr 12, 2008, 9:59:28 AM
Hah... yeah math class always made me feel that way too ;) ... Very good work, I really like this piece.

--
"...don't believe in anything
that you can't break...."

Garbage - "Stupid Girl"
:iconkasai-no-kitsune:
~Kasai-no-Kitsune Apr 12, 2008, 10:12:51 AM
Wow. That's pretty haunting. It's really well written. o.o Amazing job!

--
"Whenever you find yourself on the side of the majority, it's time to pause and reflect." -Mark Twain

I support my pairings based not on the genders of the characters involved, but on the quality and compatibility of the characters.
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~OutragedBySilence Apr 12, 2008, 11:13:07 AM
That's a really good piece of writing! It has a great flow to it. Good job!!
It's so... macabre? I hope that's the right word.. It's a great piece.
(And people do care about others!!! <3!)
:icondevyathe:
=Devyathe Apr 12, 2008, 1:00:41 PM
I'm sorry you feel this way.
Hope you'll manage.

--
Life is like a dance
:iconsaturninesweetness:
=saturninesweetness Apr 12, 2008, 7:15:06 PM
Well your rhyming style's cute.

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~ In saturnine, sweetness, Horatio Fin
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~issell Apr 12, 2008, 9:26:28 PM
thats fucked up

--
(\__/)
( O.o)
(>< )This is the evil bunny.
Copy and paste him everywhere to help him take over. he will make the world a better place.
JOIN THE DARK SIDE!!!(we have cookies...)
:iconlordmikel:
~lordmikel Apr 12, 2008, 11:15:14 PM
I think it would sound better if you changed it from "And your suicide list? Check" to "And your suicide note? Check".
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~quwira Apr 13, 2008, 5:15:55 AM
beautiful writing, it flows so well! but mayb u should get help if this is the way u feel

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"Art is what you can get away with"-Andy Warhol

free hugs [link]
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